Comments on: CG Frederator Tag: blocking pass

By: Avi

Avi — Fri, 18 Apr 2008 00:00:00 +0000

Looks great Floyd! I just have a few suggestions: maybe you should have the letters shooting in from behind the camera, instead of just making themselves appear. It’d give it some more 3D effect, and I think fit a bit better with the sound. About the background, I was thinking maybe it should be white, or a blue sky, to be less distracting. Also, just a side note, maybe have the FredBot overshoot to the right a bit more before he lands?

By: Fred Seibert

Fred Seibert — Fri, 18 Apr 2008 00:00:00 +0000

Floyd, I’m not sure when and how you want me to weigh in, but for now, I’ll just say I need it to be FREDERATOR STUDIOS, not incorporated. Sorry I didn’t make it clear.

By: Floyd Bishop

Floyd Bishop — Fri, 18 Apr 2008 00:00:00 +0000

I’ll make the swap, Fred. It’s an easy adjustment at this point.

By: Niko Anesti

Niko Anesti — Fri, 18 Apr 2008 00:00:00 +0000

I like it so far! The only thing that I think could be better is the way the letters enter. They don’t seem to appear…”hard” enough to go with the sound, if that even makes any sense, hah. Love the Fredbot flying in, and I think the light trail behind him would be an awesome effect!