Flavio

Its nice! Needs something more to it tho..

Thanks for the suggestion Stephen!

hahaha…I love his pose! He just needs a little light bulb over his head or something. Very cute!

Funny you should say that Anne! I was thinking the same thing. I’m also going to tweak it so the blue print “drawing” is on the right side filling up the empty space. thanks for the input! We’re on the same page I guess!

Oooh…i like the new light bulb edition! You could also do something cool with a light bulb being the dot over the “i”–or the center of the “o”! Or something involving the “f”! I have no clue what I’m talking about; I’ve had a lot of green tea this morning…

Actually making the dot on the eye be a lightbulb is a great idea too! Thanks! I’ll mess with that!

I edited it a tiny bit now… seems to be much more balanced.

Looks great dude! I’d photoshop in a pencil and some red eraser dust around the edges of the card so it feels like FLAVIO freshly worked on this piece. But that’s just me.

Hmmm, that’s a cool idea but don’t you think it’s getting a tiny bit too bbusy then? Maybe if Fred asks us to do postcards or something it’d be cool for that but with the title card only there for about 4 seconds I think adding that stuff might be too much to look at.

I forgot to say thanks for the suggestion though. I might actually try your idea and see what it looks like. It can’t hurt ya know? I could see scanning in a real eraser and pencil. The eraser shavings, I do not think would scan so well.

Mabye the Flavio font should be more.. mabye type writer font instead? You should test different fonts, and make them look like they’re on the paper.

I think the logo would look better in there

I actually tried using more of a hand-written font (which is really most likely how it would have been done) and it just didn’t stand out enough which is why I went with this bolder font. I want it to be as easy to read as possible. thanks for the suggestion though!

I think the logo should be there..

I liked the logo I did but in the end most people said they couldn’t read it well enough so I decided to scrap it…

Looks good to me Mike. It’s nice to see you around again. All the best,
Robles

Looks good to me Mike. It’s nice to see you around again. All the best,
Robles

Thanks Eric! You too! I saw the animatic for Fan Boy the other day… VERY funny concept! Good luck with it!